All Comments on 'Ruby'

Well, who was talking? Learn how to write speech into stories. Couldn't follow it from the start.

Maybe the story might be good, but at the very least it's miscategorized.

I think this author should do maybe 3 minutes of research into what category their story goes before uploading.

Then figure out how to write proper English, or stick with their native tongue.

Feel generous today, so I gave you one star.