All Comments on 'Russian Translation'

Good first story!

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“Alisa tapped me on my shoulder” should be something like “upon feeling a tap on my shoulder…” since you have it that the MC seems to know who is tapping on his shoulder before she introduces herself. Otherwise a solid story.

Story needs a sequel because now it stops rather abruptly

Such a fun story

A pretty good first effort. I will say, I feel like this story belongs in e.c. and it did feel a bit rushed. I say keep writing. Plenty of potential here.

Sequel please.

The is not a story, it's a novel. I need part two. I also look forward to more of your work. Thank you for writing.