All Comments on 'Rustic Nights in Khokhapur Ch. 04'

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S06JS06Jover 2 years agoAuthor

Dearies .. do comment and mark favourite the story if you like it .. your encouragement is all the motivation for me .. also let me know what next you want in the future.

S06JS06Jover 2 years agoAuthor

Readers .. Please vote and comment with how you want the theme to progress or if any criticism on the plot as of now. your words matter a lot on whether I keep writing , as this is just a avocational pursuit when I got some time on hand..

Love and keep thinking dirty !

S06J

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Frankly, the entry of this Sahana was a biggest turnoff for me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Noooo. Either sangeeta or Sharmila, no outsider please

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Next chapter please

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Well the plot is going very well just I think u need to add sangeeta.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Pls add some lustful scenes b/w sangeetha nd arjun

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Add sangeeta remove sahana

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please come up with the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

No sahana please..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I find this association of a person’s religion with abusive words quite disgusting. What are you trying to do? Please some political or religious masters?

ThomasHardy157ThomasHardy157about 2 years ago

Great finale to a good series but there is no place for being abusive of religion in an erotic story. It detracts from an otherwise great tale

S06JS06J7 months agoAuthor

I want to continue the series. Any good idea where to start?

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Sideline sahana, make Arjun bring her home and use every once in a while.... Use srjun's aunt more and medicinal property of his semen..... Incorporate his mother too but slowly and gradually starting from voyeurism to handjob and blowjob then turn her fully his submissive....

S06JS06J6 months agoAuthor

Hello guys, I have posted the next part and hopefully you will enjoy this ! Please keep liking and rating my humble work..

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