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S06JS06J6 months agoAuthor

Please comment on my humble submission

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

kinda bored with repetition in all of your stories? I was looking for an adjective: Exaggeration !

every woman is big and is voluptuous like why, the main character has 10 inches of dick why, no its not fun

tone down a little to normalcy and you would write more than just a fapping material.

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