All Comments on 'Rustle 1'

What a fun little tale. Cannot wait for the rest.

Another fun tale! You're spoiling us ... Please continue! :)

You have a wonderful mind, TnT - I love the premise of this tale and you tell it so well, I can feel the emotion between Rustle/Russell and Mara - well done. I can hardly wait for the next chapter!

Good story thus far

This is really refreshing!

A startling idea and the usual good style!

Thanks!

Pretty weird

Very creative! (And well written.) Five stars!

Interesting concept. Well played, so far.

5*

Tc

That was another great beginning, you never disappoint. thank you for putting this on here.

Great story once again. I never get enough of your stories. Always imaginative and always hard to put down.

What a delightful chapter to kick off the story!

This is an extraordinarily well written story, with extremely great storyline, well crafted, immensely entertaining and very well edited. Best writing I have seen on Lit out of over 1000 of my first readings. Thanks for sharing!!!

Thoroughly enjoying this story.