All Comments on 'S.H.E (Seduce, Hypnotise, Enslave) Ch. 04'

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WhackdoodleWhackdoodle8 months ago

Are you an incel? Because that’s what this sounds like.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I rather liked your first couple of stories, now they have just become rather dark and sad.

LightswitchtalesLightswitchtales8 months agoAuthor

Anonymous, not every chapter going forward will be so dark. In fact, this might be as dark as it gets.

@Whackdoodle, I really don't know what to do with this kind of feedback. Give me something I can work with, at least.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Author, don’t listen to that guy, this style of dark stories it’s really good

UzumakiNaruto9999UzumakiNaruto9999about 2 months ago

I really loved this story especially lesson about how to be good husband is something that should be asked from your wife first and then others as a feedback.

Honestly I have really really loved your all stories till now with some more than others. Personally I feel this story wasn't dark in comparison to first one where Dr. Stephanie seemed really like a bitch for messing with someone out of nowhere and no reason other than to take his place and work. This seemed more humane. Although personally I would have loved it more if subject agreed for such terms and relationship consensually like in many BDSM stories out there, I wish to read about female hynodomme who is both caring and strict and best to guide you while also seducing you somewhat like here becoming my own goddess who teases and plays with me 😋

So if I were to say that it would be best if relationship between Hannah and Jacob evolves as them finding love and wonderful sex again with Jacob being fully conscious for quite a few times in between and Hannah talks with him in that state too for important decisions or so should be overall message and ending.

Like love and relationship should be given importance enough rather than only sexual aspects of it by both partners and not only one sidedly from sub to their domme, I hope you can make stories containing this message too.

Lastly if possible can you please include hypnotising words and method each time like details and slow process in chapter 3, that makes it more erotic and whole lot interesting for me personally atleast.

Sorry to be so demanding, anyhow I loved your all stories till now especially this one although a little dark was still super interesting for me ☺️

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