by leeanna19
Very interesting and a little gruesome, I am way too nervous to read the rest, ha....
I hope this doesn't become another story listed as forced, but the victim just goes along with everything. A kidnap victim will fight to the death for their freedom. The MC has had his whole future stolen by psychos. Him staying resolute and fighting back, with freedom as his goal will frustrate his captors and make this story so much better than most. He may end up with a different future now, but it can't be with his captors free to do it to others.
Love the premise, a little short would like to see it fleshed out and continued.
This is a gold mine of a story, so much you can do with it...I to, like women turning men
into gurls, it is so exciting to read them and think, that could me it's happening too...
Hugs and Kisses Betty jo xoxo
The story crashed with the gruesome removal. That is not erotic but more like slasher film porn. You should redo the story without the gore, otherwise it loses actual , enduring erotic value.
I wouldn't say "gruesome removal". It was stated what happened. There was no graphic detail. Not that unusual in force fem stories. I don't get some of the reactions to people who read a force fem stories and say . I would beat them both to death etc.
If that happened you would not have a forced fem story.
Please post a follow up. You're exceptionally good at this is. However you used to post more regularly. Do so.
Ordinarily, I love your work. You are a helluva writer, and even this piece builds a solid foundation. But given the forced nature of the transition, I will respectfully pass.
As ever, thanks for sharing your talent, and I look forward to reading something else from you in the future.
I love the story. Can't wait to read the sequels. I fantasize all the time of being in Kristy's position.
leeanne19, this is DEFINITELY a HOT story! You are right. I never expected this type of story from you! This kidnapping and forced fem situation is so scary and terrifying! I certainly would not want this happening to me in real life! At the same time, it's a great fantasy and something that is arousing to think about!
Pleasd continue. Tell us all about her sprouting nice A cups and her hips curving. She begins to become aroused when she sees Bob's cock and balls. Her training must include heels, makeup, earings, and lots of beautiful girly clothes.
That one would be expected to be aroused by mutilation. This should be a unique category for those, so inclined.
It is just fiction. Yes ,about arousal through mutilation. No problem but there should be a separate category , I agree with that comment. Not to mention tags about said horrible act.