All Comments on 'Sabrina Sleepwalks Pt. 01'

by CommanderBelpen

Sort by:
  • 3 Comments
laughdruidlaughdruidalmost 2 years ago

I loved this story, though I was just getting into it when it ended.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago
Hell yeh

Bring on part 2

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

As far as I know yours is the only one using this theme. I love originality. Sargedog 1 had some good points, but was a little too rough on you. I didn't like your getting the mother involved either, but I guess you'll use her later. I don't like mother-son stories. Remember; Oedipus gouged his eyes out when he found out he'd done it. He hadn't even known it was his mother he was fucking. Yes and thank you for not trying to sell his cock being as big as a Coke Can.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
userCommanderBelpen@CommanderBelpen
*Unfortunately my health is taking a turn for the worse. I will keep trying to write for you, but my output is going to slow considerably. Thank you for your patience. Struggling author. In a long distance relationship with a real firecracker! I welcome all feedback, please, ...

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES