All Comments on 'Sabrina's Submission'

I enjoyed your story a great deal. My only criticism is the typos. There were several places where you used the wrong form of the word (new instead of knew) or the wrong word entirely (reminder her instead of remind her). I think if you corrected those it would be a truly amazing story!

One of the best stories I have read in ages! The detail is amazing and the story line is perfect! She know how to please her master and he knows what she needs. Please continue the story if you can. So sensual and exciting!!