All Comments on 'Sacrificial Lamb'

Simply haunting.

A truly haunting story . . . a rarity . . . an incest story with unusual emotion.

Beautiful, just beautiful. Words cannot express how wonderful that was.

...just misspelled "hole" as "whole". Only typos I saw. Great story, and you kept the names straight. Keep it up!

It was a very loving and caring story filled with love. I wouldn't have called her a sacrificial lamb. More of a internment of healing for the both of them.

A truly romantic and beautifuly haunting tale... spelbindingly touching and lovely.

Beautiful and full of love. It doesn't get better than this. The writing was excellent, and hot, and many men I'm sure wished that they had a loving daughter just like this one...

The religious symbolism, the way the language shifted between King James-esque to Literotica and back and the detached first person narraration results in a story that feels as if the daughter in the story is suffering from religious delusions. There is a strong horror tone to the story, as if it is supposed to be beautiful but so uncanny and unnerving that it results in a deep sense of wrongness to the story. It is unsettling. I loved it.

So realistically done.Is this based on true experiences with your dad? Nonetheless it was excellently done and in need of a continuation of these two please :) btw,5 stars for this AND the previous father/daughter story of yours I've left a comment prior.....

Wish you had more... thank you.