by foxxxie
So realistically done.Is this based on true experiences with your dad? Nonetheless it was excellently done and in need of a continuation of these two please :) btw,5 stars for this AND the previous father/daughter story of yours I've left a comment prior.....
The religious symbolism, the way the language shifted between King James-esque to Literotica and back and the detached first person narraration results in a story that feels as if the daughter in the story is suffering from religious delusions. There is a strong horror tone to the story, as if it is supposed to be beautiful but so uncanny and unnerving that it results in a deep sense of wrongness to the story. It is unsettling. I loved it.
Beautiful and full of love. It doesn't get better than this. The writing was excellent, and hot, and many men I'm sure wished that they had a loving daughter just like this one...
A truly romantic and beautifuly haunting tale... spelbindingly touching and lovely.
It was a very loving and caring story filled with love. I wouldn't have called her a sacrificial lamb. More of a internment of healing for the both of them.
...just misspelled "hole" as "whole". Only typos I saw. Great story, and you kept the names straight. Keep it up!
Beautiful, just beautiful. Words cannot express how wonderful that was.
A truly haunting story . . . a rarity . . . an incest story with unusual emotion.