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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This... was... poorly... written... you... can't... write... dialogue...

See how annoying that looked.

Besides seeing that everywhere the rest of the story was just terrible.

DanDraperDanDraperover 2 years ago

You might want to fix how you write your dialogue. but other than that this was alright.

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