All Comments on 'Saint Ch. 01'

Can't wait to see how this builds, especially with that crazy bitch in the picture between the two. Oh and I love Tanyi's name. Very unique!

so far. Hope you keep writing more.

great build and wait for more

I like the story line but Tanyi and Saint seem to be moving rather quickly. One minute they have a shy infactuation with each other, a little flirting is going on. The next they're in bed together getting it on. It would have been interesting if the flirtations continued back and forth, if the "fiancee" unknowing found herself with competition, and if the fire resulted in Tanyi living with Saint until she can get back on her feet.

O! you meant "Porshe" ? or maybe he can design a porch that drives like crazy. porches! otherwise, a fun romp. or rump.