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by VintageChiffon

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AnonymousAnonymous11 days ago

Not enough development, not enough context, and not enough story.

A good start, but that's it.

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I'm an amateur writer of erotic short stories and poetry. My works frequently involve my passion for history, LGBT+ characters/romance/sex, and unusual exploits with nonhuman entities.