All Comments on 'SAMBA Pt. 07'

Dan is a good man. He is definitely trying his best. Mandy and Mark owe that poor sap a lot. His character has grown the most in this series. Hopefully mother and son can soon be open with their activities. One of the best possible outcomes would be Dan is happy with how happy mother and son make each other. Bonus points for Dan completely approving mother son anal out in the open.

Mark is fast becoming a dickhead. He does not respect his mother anymore. That's not good. What he is, is not being dominant, but just selfish. Also, the amount of mother son anal is going down. That is the main draw of this story. To be losing it is a bit sad.

The story between Mandy and Mark is not resolved yet. Adding Ryan into the mix is just poor planning on the author's part. You are shifting focus away from the central characters. That's not good.

Anyway, this is your story. You would know best.

Eagerly awaiting the next installment.

Ciao

@namidaboshi Thanks for the fair and honest feedback. If you feel that Mark is at times a dickhead, then that is good, as I'm striving to portray the immature and somewhat selfish youth on the cusp of but not yet at full adulthood. That and other things mentioned are the "struggles to overcome" that are the vital ingredient of most stories. My feeling is that if everything is fine and dandy, and everything gets delivered page after page, with no conflict then it makes for a very dull read. Perhaps I have succeeded in this, or perhaps not. And don't worry, the anal content is not going away.

You really need to have more missionary sex scenes, a lot more sex scenes with Mark and Mandy.. I get Mark loves butt sex but fucking a pussy is just as hot.. legs up and the headboard slapping the wall.. yesss

I like what they're doing to Dan but hate the sharing with the other guys

Liking how Dan is getting drawn in. Please keep the focus on mom and son anal and less pussy, but other than that the series has been a solid 5 stars. Well done.

You have a way with words and I totally dig your voluptuous mom. What a woman. If possible more with mom in doggy style (but vaginal). ***** stars.

SUPER HOT story and chapter!!!!!

5 stars from here!