by wordyone
Wow what a long drawn out story. I wanted to quit reading, but I hoped it would get better. But it got worse. What a waste of time. Give up on writing.
This should have been 2 pages MAX. Can I please have my life back?
PS if it was good 7 pages is nothing to me.
SO... write shorter... or writer better.
While it may have been a bit too long the anticipation you built was worth the wait. Don't listen to the last two comments because they are the typical "one pump chumps." Thanks for a really solid and tittilating tale, kudos to you!!