All Comments on 'Sampling Some Italian'

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sacksackover 17 years ago
now that's intense sex.....

nicely put in a framework of an imaginative story.....BRAVO!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Too formal

Sorry, but I was instantly switched off by the excruciately formal tone of the dialogue and description. This reads less like erotica than it does the minutes of a council meeting.

jushornyjushornyover 17 years ago
Hot

I found this story quite hot, will there be more to the artist's story

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