by inkstand
Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter although it's completely different from my usual choices. Remarkable good for a first submission, however, I can tell it's not the first story you've written. Thank you.
A wonderful start to a tale that I look forward to with great anticipation.
I love this story so far. Aubrey has a real person feel to him and I find myself rooting for him. This seems to be a new age Cinderella story. I was looking for some BDSM smut and found a rich beginning to a story. I enjoy your style of writing and I can’t believe this is a first submission. Keep writing and don’t make us wait to long to find out what happens next.