All Comments on 'Sandhya Bhabi Pt. 01'

Not bad for a first attempt. Don’t make the mistake many authors do of assuming an erotic story is just a couple of explicit sex scenes. Take the time to cook up a decent plot and develop the characters. And when it comes to the erotic parts, do remember to leave something to the reader’s imagination.

Nice attempt. Enjoyed it. You've rightly captured the boredom that affects married life after 5/6 years of marriage. Many wives take it wrong when their husbands enjoy showing the voluptuous body of the wife to someone else. It adds spices to marital sex. You captured this very correctly. Keep writing.

Very convincingly told, and highly erotic. The focus on your internal thoughts and feelings, and especially your sexual sensations, is effective. Looking forward to the next instalment.