All Comments on 'Sandra'

Nice story, good strong characters. But most amazing is the writing. The strip scenes with Brian are incredible. Great writing, great erotica.

I gave it 5 stars because that's all they allow. This is a keeper.

THANKS

Great start - where are you taking us next?

So enjoyed this story; funny, at times poignant, and easily imagined characters. Did wonder what happened to mother-daughter witty engagement for a time in the story, but you brought Mom back in the end. Clearly a 5 rating, and hoping for more. Very nicely written.

I can't disagree with these comments praising your story.

I have only one gripe. Hou have a problem with lay, laying and laid. You keep writing of laying when it should be lying, and laid instead of lay.

Hope your next story will fix that.

Better than most. Good writing.

Absolutely love your first time story five stars worth! But I'm wondering, where did the Boy Scout learn to eat pussy before the internet? Is there a Badge for that I don't know about? Was it Brian at the door, we can only hope.

Excellent thoroughly enjoyed this brings back some happy memories