All Comments on 'Sandy's New Role Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
BDSM perhaps

Should not be in loving wives.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Nothing new here!

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Not Loving

Not a wife, not erotic, just hard core, no plot,no story, low life dogs in the back yard fucking. Call the A.S.P.C.A and move on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
What a crock.

Pure crap pure crap. The writing was bad!!!!!!!

peteinchicagopeteinchicagoalmost 15 years ago
not bad

tom needs to take back control of his whore, let her service at his command not gharry's. let her be a slave for him and his new girl

CandyKDCandyKDalmost 10 years ago
wth?

Don't leave it like a cliffhanger

I could see everything happening

Please write more

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Erotic?

Matter of opinion. I'll pass on this garbage.

aherbaherbover 6 years ago
Wonderful!!

I've really enjoyed this series about Sandy and her submission to Gary and to Tom. Please tell me there is more to come - you can't leave us hanging on the edge like this!

Well done author!

WargamerWargamerover 2 years ago

Unfinished, ruining the story

Scores 1/5

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

FTDS. Amateurish move to leave the story dangling like that…

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