by CrazyDaveTrucker60
simple errors as: 4 X 4200 = 16,800 NOT 12,800. Husband/boyfriend - keep your facts straight make the story difficult to read. I enjoy your stories, but please double check before publishing.
I enjoyed the story but was enjoying it More at the beginning than at the end. It was getting a little hectic at the end of the story. I liked that this sweet trucker had been faithful to his wife all those years. I liked that the author used very erotic descriptive terms to give me a very visual picture of what was going on. I don't like women referred to as sluts but that's my preference. I think I would've enjoyed the story more had it just been George with Sheila, &/or Cami instead of adding the other 2 women. Like I said, it got a little hectic. Even if he had a thing with BB later in the story, but the way it went, just didn't seem cohesive. I did like the author however. I hope to read more from him.
Looks like you picked up a new follower reading the prior comment. I love it when you plow through the women. Do we get a back story on Barbara? Four stars.
There is a saying, "Keep Christmas with you all through the year," and the continuation of this story will do just that. Loved the story.
Loved this Story .. Heck everyone knows it is Fiction so let the Man write .. I am also waiting for 2 more Chapters Here .
This was a great start to a story, but there was no ending.