by CrazyDaveTrucker60
This was a great start to a story, but there was no ending.
Loved this Story .. Heck everyone knows it is Fiction so let the Man write .. I am also waiting for 2 more Chapters Here .
There is a saying, "Keep Christmas with you all through the year," and the continuation of this story will do just that. Loved the story.
Looks like you picked up a new follower reading the prior comment. I love it when you plow through the women. Do we get a back story on Barbara? Four stars.
I enjoyed the story but was enjoying it More at the beginning than at the end. It was getting a little hectic at the end of the story. I liked that this sweet trucker had been faithful to his wife all those years. I liked that the author used very erotic descriptive terms to give me a very visual picture of what was going on. I don't like women referred to as sluts but that's my preference. I think I would've enjoyed the story more had it just been George with Sheila, &/or Cami instead of adding the other 2 women. Like I said, it got a little hectic. Even if he had a thing with BB later in the story, but the way it went, just didn't seem cohesive. I did like the author however. I hope to read more from him.
simple errors as: 4 X 4200 = 16,800 NOT 12,800. Husband/boyfriend - keep your facts straight make the story difficult to read. I enjoy your stories, but please double check before publishing.