All Comments on 'Sara & Laura Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

i just found this story , oh wow . please keep posting more for i'd love to see these 2 fall in love . thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
If If this story didn't have any explicit sex in it

I'd still read it. The interactions between the characters brought a smile to my face that few books, let alone free online stories, have managed. I hope that however raunchy or crazy the story might get, the character focus stays prevalent. Seriously well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Very well written

Love to know how it plays out.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Please keep this story alive

This story is amazing and I’d love to find out what happens at game night! Not to mention the budding romance aspect. Well written and a good plot, this story has it all!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

I did like to see the charakter develop. It's a nice story and I like to read more of it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Awesome

Amazing. You have something really good going with this series. I can tell after this chapter this is going to be a good series. Hopefully, you find a way to extend this series into a 5 or 6-part series, just don't let the series drag on too long. Another great chapter and hope you continue to do many other series after Sara & Laura.

cjm3rcl1n3cjm3rcl1n3about 5 years ago
Lovely work

Hope to read more, please! Very sexy story so far!

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