All Comments on 'Sarah and Noah Ch. 08'

The end?

In the first three chapters to this story, you gave readers all the details of their relationship..

You detailed every word, thought and orgasm of their encounters.

Now for the last couple of chapters, you only mentioned the conception, pregnancy and delivery in passing, not describing the actual events.

Seems to be a bit of a disconnect between the chapters.

I liked the first few, but if anything I thought they had too much narrative, now there is too little.

I always enjoy hearing about these two. Even though neither pee play nor breast milk are my thing I'm always happy to read they're doing ok, and thrilled that they are able to mend the relationship with their father.

I remember you writing about how these two enjoyed the musk and sweaty scents of each other’s bodies, and how Sarah was a runner too. Perhaps you could work that into a foot fetish chapter where Noah indulges himself in Sarah’s sweaty feet fresh out of her socks and trainers? Then that leads to a footjob?

I have really enjoyed the series, it has an excellent storyline and I for one hope that the author continues it as I believe that it still has so many possibilities. Well done 5++Stars

Please continue. More kids. More love. But not gangbangs or switchings.

I would love a sequel

I agree with the anonymous comment that this felt rushed. But I still gave it 5/5.

@ScottishTexan I think the consensus on the tattoo has been pretty strong. I'm thinking of editing it out.

I had to wrap this up before some real life projects so it was a bit rushed. There's another part in the works that slows it down a bit. Thanks for reading so carefully and for giving me much valued feedback including the critical feedback, it's appreciated!

It should be a sequel where there kids fall in love

What an amazing and detailed build up to one of the best incest yet romantic stories out there - loved it. Shame that the last 2-3 chapters felt rushed when you could have continued the same pace and built on it - either way it still had everything one could have asked for - nice build up, romance, hot sex, impregnating, lactation - just wow. Would love to read more

It's all been said really but it must be one of the best incest stories on here written by people who feel the love and agony of the main characters situation. Their bio in my opinion quite clearly states this is a fictionalized but autobiographical account of their life together, we have to respect that the bio is honest and trust that this is as stated. I admire that and wish them well. It has to be five stars.

What an absolutely beautiful story! You captured the pure love that only siblings could possibly share.

A very good continuation! Glad to see the parents are on board. 5🌟 And regarding the tatoo, i'm glad the author has not yet edited it out. Personally, i thought it was hilarious. And it just serves to further affirm how kinky Sarah is. I recall a commenter back two or three parts stating a concern for when Sarah goes to a doctor that their secret might be found out. So, here's a couple of possible solutions: One, Sarah can keep a broad point Sharpie on hand for those doctor appointments. Noah can practice his Art work ability. Or, better yet, she can put a couple of strips of Duct tape across her Ass cheeks.😁

It looks like they're well on their way to living their dream with a family of their own. I suspect more children in future. It would be nice to see it go further and 2 of their own children end up falling in love and their parents support and love them completely, knowing full well what it's like to go through that. Of course, they notice it well before that stage, much like Amy noticed Noah's adoration and growing love for his sister over the years, and thus actually speak to their children about it early and encourage them as time goes on, ultimately leading to the 2 children falling more deeply in love with each other than any of them could have ever possibly imagined. Feel the love <3