All Comments on 'Sarah Shares Her Husband'

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DunkirkDunkirkalmost 4 years ago

Next time it should be a true threesome. He should fuck both Sarah and bree and leave their cunts filled. They can then clean his cock and then each other's pussies

Turbulence1973Turbulence1973almost 4 years ago
That was excellent

Hope to read more soon about these three

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

It's always amusing how stories with husbands that share their wives are 1 voted and blasted but when wives share their husbands they are 5 voted and celebrated. No, there is no hypocrisy here at all lol

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Well written story with nice ending

Fun story, that beat expectations - the second sentence should have started "My wife Sarah and I were at home watching a movie..." So I expected the grammar to be a minor distraction, but it wasn't and the development and climax were very well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Nice

Just hope the marriage doesn't go south

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
"Oh my goodness, I've never had one this big before."

I can tell from this woman's restraint, inhibitions, and religious devotion that she could never utter "Oh my God!" Such an engaging and original plot.

I think its called Fag Cuck Shit, even with the genders reversed.

Thanks for the effort.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Wait, what?

Where are all the "she's a slut/whore who should be taken out with the garbage" comments? I smell a YUGE double standard here. LMAO!

LickideesplitLickideesplitalmost 4 years ago

“One night while me was at home ...”

When a story starts like that, it is hard to read any further!

When there is a compound subject (like two or more people) the simple preceedure is to condider the sentence as a single subject (as shown in the first quote above.) It should sound right with “I” instead of “me.” There are other ways to determine the proper way to do this, but the process described should work well (unless you hear/read the quote above as correct. Then you should activate the grammar check option on your word processing software.)

BuckeyebobBuckeyebobalmost 4 years ago
Really?

I can’t get past the second paragraph.

Don’t you realize how bad grammar makes you look like an ignorant idiot.

“Me and my wife.......” arrrrrgggg

My wife and I.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Proofread!

Look up shudder vs. shutter in a dictionary.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
This is a story about stupidity and loss

The loss of a marriage and the loss of a best friend. Because that's where this ends. The story was both improbable and unbelievable. Nobody is THAT stupid.

1 star

IFAFILHGIFAFILHGalmost 4 years ago
IT'S ABOUT TIME

Its about time someone writes a story about the wife wanting to watch the husband... Excellent story... 5 Stars

The_Artfull_CodgerThe_Artfull_Codgeralmost 4 years ago

OMG! People don't speak this way

26thNC26thNCalmost 4 years ago

This husband getting his while wife watches is getting big in LW. When the humiliation and chastity belts come out, it wont be as popular.

SevMax2SevMax2almost 4 years ago
Fuckin' A!

So, there were some mistakes..but hot damn! Jay is one lucky bastard to have a wife like Sarah who is eager to share him with another woman! It sounds like he'll be having a long-standing affair with her, too. Sweeet!

CorzineCorpsCorzineCorpsalmost 4 years ago
My man is getting some extramarital fun;

this is a wonderful story. 5 stars: would read again.

loveloverloveloveralmost 4 years ago

I love stories where they all know what they want and do share.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Best kind of story

Love a story where everyone feels equally happy. More stories should involve consent between a group of mature adults who are open with their sexuality and kinks. Keep writing that kind of fun.

IFAFILHGIFAFILHGabout 3 years ago
HOT STORY

fun hot sexy erotic story...enjoyed reading it... glad author kept all three together in the same room..the only correct way for sharing... 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Good story, fairly well written... I just have one minor complaint: SHUTTERS are what cover the windows of your house... a person SHUDDERS from a chill up their spine...

LadiesAreFirstLadiesAreFirstover 2 years ago

Been there, almost the same scenario.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Fag Cuck Shit. Oh, you thought changing the genders makes it OK? So when does Sarah get her fantasies satisfied? Pathetic.

AkpervertAkpervert3 months ago

A cum dream true, if there ever was one. I'm looking forward to Ch. 02.

I'd LOVE to live this one myself.

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