All Comments on 'Sarah's Adventures: Babysitting'

I haven’t read your other story because the category as an absolute turn off for as well as a hard limit, something of a no brainer there.

This story however was really really scorchingly hot!

Thanks for sharing.

Tess (UK)

A Human Editor, not just autocorrect.

Ass, not as. And a few others, like mistaking latter for former.

Good points: fun plot, hot action, professionally written "flow" of the narrative.