by AimEnigmaClick
Enjoy your break. I would just like to thank you for this adventure and your other excellent story about Jane. Fantastic work.
An excellent finale. Satisfying, but leaves you wanting more. Have a great break. Thanks for a great story.
A wonderfully poignant, crazy adventure and perfect ending with a promise of more to come. All the characters so well developed, especially Sarah and Brittany. I cannot wait to follow their journey and reconnection. Thanks for sharing - you write so well.
You're killing me! Rest up, but please don't drag it out too long when you get back. These two are so great together!
loove it.
You have us wondering if there maybe a cross over with one of these characters with Jane or one of the ladies from your other series.
Beautiful work. Sad, but well written. I cant wait for that reunion. They make each other better. The key to all great love stories.
Not surprised this is the first, but your underlying ability to write shows here. I am unable to sensibly do critique but having read other of you writing you seem on a journey and I for one really enjoy your writing so please continue