All Comments on 'Sarah's Naughty Decision Pt. 02'

please, do a 3rd chapter

No interest whatsoever

No interest here don’t post pt 3

NEVER continue, Terrible writing, horrible premise and a laughable story.

I agree with the comment of the guy made about the first story. Baseball bat to the head of Jake for sure.

This wasn’t cuckoldry, it was abuse. Mental, physical and emotional.

Being their servant, being forced to wear a chastity device, being threatened with physical assault, being tied up: these are problematic because they weren’t mutual or agreed upon or even given a safe word.

She emasculated her husband, humiliated him, threatened him and then treated him like he didn’t exist.

This wasn’t living, it was designed to hurt him.

And you want to know if there should be a part 3? Only if it involves her giving him divorce papers. Because why stay married to someone you hate so much that all you want to do is hurt them?

Please no, stop this sh#t asap, You write ok but the theme...

Opened story 1 star moved on. Hopefully in real life the writer stops writing and is never heard from again. Unfortunately pathetic cuck writers like this twisted fuck live for years. But hope against hope they all die slow painful deaths.

Wow, great story. Very well written

This story doesn't even deserve 1 star.

No need for part 3, its just so Bad, stop here for your own good

This belongs in Fetish or BDSM, not Loving Wives. Chastity and cages are a fetish, and generally are not part of the cuckold scene or lifestyle

Part 1 was too much shit! Part 2 was shit over shit! Why the need of part 3? You must like to live surrounded by smelly shit!

"As Mark LEARNS to submit?" It seems he already has a doctorate in submission.

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If you have to ask readers if you should to a Part 3, then you shouldn't do one. You've either got it in you or you don't.

It is good but mark easily gave up and got manipulated

Hope in the next part he gets his say or his revenge

If there should be a part 3, it should be directed to the marital relationship. All I see is pedestrian sex and no development of the why they decided to do a 3-some, why wife did what she did, how wife can reconcile her actions, and what happens to their marriage. If the only ending is that wife fucks everything on two legs while keeping husband in a cock cage, with or without other feminization and/or humiliation, then don't bother writing. We don't need another story like that.

Does she have him knock her up, do they make you their sissy lots of possibilities

It sucks badly

Should be a part 3 where he sucks Jakr’s cock and gets his ass fucked!! I go too far in my writing and get around the bend quickly but I wouldn’t mind seeing an episode where Jake has some friends over and the couple pulls a train!!!! Ignore the haters!!

I hope he can find some pride and get out of this mess

Well done to come

Please more

Loved it

The only time ING that can save your sorry ass from being a complete fucking pussy is to drug their good then ttie Jake up put him in the trunk of a stolen car and park it in the hotest parking lot in Arizona. Then sell his wife to a Columbian pimp. Anything else just makes you pathetic

It is amazing how in the first installment Mark saw all the action while wearing a blindfold. You need to find an editor to help you make sense of your story. That really wrecked the whole story.

Oh yes part 3 please.

Just wanted to chime in because there is a lot of angry comments. This makes me so happy. As an amateur author, my soul purpose was to get the reader to FEEL. So if you felt any real emotions while reading my work. I am so grateful that you have taken the time to let me know. For people who liked it. Same goes. I want my readers to Feel. Thanks for all the support everyone.

-Kelsey K

Just crap

I need a real man like Jake to fuck my wife properly since I have a small 4" dink. I'd love to continuously have to clean them both up while wearing my tiny pink little penis cage. I was born to be a little dink cuckold beta batch.

I enjoyed it. Please post part 3

Part 3 please

On a day for wretched cuck stories , this may be the worst.

Def a part 3

Please utilise the other available categories. This belongs in FETISH or Nonconsent/reluctance.

PLEASE HAVE SOMETHING WICKLY BAD HAPPEN TO JAKE. Give the husband back some dignity.

Apart from the writing, which is good, does anyone really enjoy this type of story?

If you do a part 3 it should be Mark's revenge. Little something special seasoning the eggs. Something special mixed with the butter on the toast. Knock out pills in their coffee. They eat, they pass out. Take them out to a secluded location. Jake wakes tied to the chair Mark was tied to.laying on his back Mark pissing on his face to wake him. Jake has a string tied tight around his sack. The string going under his ass up his crack over the back of the chair and tied to his wife's wrist with her back to him and blindfolded. A tazer is used. First him then her. Everytime she moves her arm the string gets tighter around Jake's nuts and they get pulled under him. Have fun with the revenge make them both beg for it to stop. Payback is hell

Good; Part 3 please.

Can someone write a twist where cuck had enough and FUCK UP THE BITCH AND BASTARD FOR ONCE?!

Well if you could man the little wimp up and make him grow a set and take his 5 iron to the back of Jakes skull like he’s trying to drive the ball 300 yards . Then tie the two bitches up and pour gasoline all over them , hand each a zippo and tell them if they want free they’ll have to burn through the ropes . Open two large propane bottles from the grill , set a timer on the dresser with an electric sparkler hooked up , set the timer to 1 1/2 hours , grab all three of your wallets and car keys , give your wife a final kiss telling her she looks ‘hot’ and leave , otherwise I hope you don’t !

Not sure why if he was afraid of this guy and was wanting a threesone but his wife set him up didn’t he just go to garage and grab the heaviest thing , bat, crow bar etc.. He should have waited th hear them fuckin than started smashing everything in the house or break his knees while he’s fucking her. No need to be abused by him and the wife

I would like to chime in for a Part 3 and further stories please! It's difficult to come across decently written smut that caters to humiliation kinks, so ignore all the haters, there IS an audience for this type of content. For those looking for similar themes, I recommend NTRMaster AKA unrelentingcruelty.

Looking forward to see further emasculation, perhaps with some breeding sprinkled in?

Waiting anxiously for part 3.

Why do so many people want to see fictional characters get murdered in a story they don't like? This is erotic fiction. Jake likes the humiliation. His wife really likes it. So does the bull. Nobody involved in the story has a real problem with what's happening.

On the flip side, since this is all supposed to be erotic fiction ... the people who are advocating for violent revenge are pretty fucked up, because apparently that's what they get off to.

I would absolutely love to see a chapter 3! Wonderful story so far x

Great story love it

Part 3 please!!!!!! So good!

Intense.

As real as a dream for some

Sick as a nightmare for others.

Excellent delivery and wrap.

yes to pt. 3

Hard to believe that there are people like this. Not being funny, but Jake would find himself roofied and videoed being anally raped with a huge dildo with the videos posted to social media from a random account and Sarah would find herself out on the street naked.

Story pt 2 sucks . If you do a 3 it has to include a baseball bat to both for revenge

Definitely 3, where Sarah craves more variety.

There seems to be no more part 3

What a shame it did not go to BTB....

The Hubby was down stairs all night was there not a Old Base Ball bat a rolling Pen or a Butcher knife handy? Did they have any sleeping pills around for the Coffee or to mix in the Breakfast food ? Knock them out with the sleeping Pills and when they woke up They would be the Ones tied up and He would have the Cock cage Off then it would be His turn for Pay back The stud would loose His balls maybe Part of His Cock The wife would hate the super Glue in Her Pussy and ass But would I care? Not after what they did to Him the next thing would be a Attorney and ending the marriage.

Awesome! Part 3 PLEASE!

didnt even read part 2 two discusted please dont do part 3