All Comments on 'Sara's New Discovery'

I really liked this... I hope it evolves.

Great story, easy to read and very believable content

Liked it. Something new, fresh, and different than other stories.

Interesting premise.

But much too short. It's barely begun, and then it's all over. It's just setting the stage.

Imagine watching a Super Bowl game and the coverage ended after 5 minutes ito the first quarter. Not very satisfying.

Get to the real action where she edges him. And don't end chapter two on the first page. Getting to the end of a chapter is not a 100-yard dash.

Four stars for potential.

Loved it...going to try it

Nice. Too short tho... 4 stars.

Premise was a surprise.

I expected her to edge him, not herself.

Two stars.