by Hamlin
For me, chapters 1 & 2 were the best. I love domineering and a little control but this is too much for me now with the subliminal messages and the slave type treatment. I’m starting to lose interest in this story
Wow! Story is incredible. I love the notion of total control of a girl, mentally & physically.
After chapter 3 which was... not pleasing to everyone, you come back with this gem. Great work! Keep it up ;)