All Comments on 'Satan's Slaves MC 01'

Hopefully Claire will go as well....M&D combo would be excellent

Satan's slaves MC is a PLC

So far so good!

TK

Like the story would like to see it go forward

I know it's only a story, but no married couple in their right mind would interact like this with a gang. The premise has to make sense and this one doesn't.

What is wrong with this wife? Does she not realize how dangerous a group of bikers are? Is she just so bored with life? What would hubby do if Cream had of kicked his bike into gear once she put her foot on the pegs? He'd have left with her and fucked her someplace before he brought her back. What a family of morons. Bikers might seem nice to the pussy but that is cuz they want to fuck them. They'll be pulling a train on both women if you give them a chance. LOL Mess bikers you will get fucked.

I get it's a story but I have personal experience dealing with outlaw motorcycle gangsters I was on the opposite side of the law from them). There is nothing cute or sexy or hot about them; they are extremely violent, live lives of crime from drug dealing and human trafficking to murder, rape and arson. Once someone is part of that world, they do not ever get out of it.

I suspect that this is going to be some sex filled fantasy in which wifey gets to be the bitch for a bunch of bikers (or maybe hubby gets used to). As a sex fantasy, whatever floats the reader's boat, I guess; this is a dirty story site after all. But in real life, she'd immediately become common property of the gang, gang banged, essentially enslaved and turning tricks on the side for them. Hubby would be recruited into being a drug mule if he was lucky or likely, much much worse. And daughter would likely be forced into the gang as well. They should contact the cops ASAP.

3*** and i won't be reading any more. Having seen it, I don't want to contemplate a real life nightmare being turned into a fantasy.

If this were reality, then of course your tale wouldn't work, but as this is a tale, and because it hits a nasty nerve in my psyche, I'm going to read the next chapter. I would humbly suggest that you find an editor for the few typos and grammatical mistakes I saw (e.g., "desserts" [with two s's because you want two], not "deserts"), but otherwise, I look forward to seeing what happens. Cheers!

Dumb premise.

Man, don’t people know about these gangs yet?