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by notenoughways

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JudyLeeJudyLeeover 8 years ago
A good short story.

Are they going to switch D/s roles? One question about what you wrote. Near the end, he felt her ass 'full and hard against his belly '. You hadn't mentioned a plug. Was she 'full 'with a butt plug? All in all, a pretty good story.

notenoughwaysnotenoughwaysover 8 years agoAuthor
Continuations & Newbie errors

My thanks for taking the time to feedback - grateful.

I have been thinking of continuing this for a few more - and yes reversal would be next ;)

As to the description confusion with her bum - solely an editing error - mine alone. Leaving it for posterity :) x

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