by MDSW
I like the story but feel it's a little repetitive sometimes. And that tends to slow down the story a bit. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Thanks for sharing your talents with us.
I am into this story, but you can only say the compliments, self-stories and lessons so many ways so many times before it gets repetitve and the reader starts glossing over the pages looking for something new. I found myself doing that in the last two chapters (this one inclusive.)