All Comments on 'Satisfied With Love Ch. 14'

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PhotoMeisterPhotoMeisteralmost 4 years ago
Good story

I like the story but feel it's a little repetitive sometimes. And that tends to slow down the story a bit. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Thanks for sharing your talents with us.

arrowglassarrowglassover 3 years ago
I agree!

I am into this story, but you can only say the compliments, self-stories and lessons so many ways so many times before it gets repetitve and the reader starts glossing over the pages looking for something new. I found myself doing that in the last two chapters (this one inclusive.)

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I am interested in writing stories that include sex, some integrated with love and a relationship. Some writers are good at it and others aren't as lucky. I'm not a perfect writer nor a perfect person, but this is my attempt at writing. I do hope to improve with age. I hate t...

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