by MDSW
I like you story but have to admit I did not like all of the crying, it became redundant. It seems as if you were trying to make the story longer which was not necessary. All the crying in the professional setting shows the women as weak and unable to control their emotions.
Beautifully written tear-jerker, this compelling romantic drama has wonderful characters, and this chapter is an excellent sample of this outstanding series. However, this story needs to be read from Chapter 1, in order to make sense of the story and to truly appreciate it fully. Five stars.