by jessica_tang_vonharper
I read the first few chapters a couple of months back and loved them. Someone continued you story but it left the exciting and thrilling feel of almost getting caught and doing things along the li es of exhibition and quickly delved into wanton sex with all and sundry. I much prefer your line of story!! This line of story makes me wet and makes me want to be daring. You have a great level of depth to the story so that it's it just sex. Love it
Developing slowly but surely, and so nicely written.
Lue
Thanks for a great Christmas present.
Loved the descriptive and insightful writing.
I was waiting for so long for new chapter from Michelle and Charlie.
Thanks for this Chistmas Gift.
Poor Michelle, left outside naked until the next instalment!
Can't wait!
Charlie and Michelle need to be together and be truly and deeply in love. Waiting patiently for Chapter 7.
I was just as nervous as Michelle. She is content to let Charlie give her directions.
Is Ronnie going to join them at the gardens? Is Ronnie showing interest in possibly experiencing the same exposure Michelle likes?
...I have with this series is that each chapter takes so long to hit the shelves. Of course they could come one a day, and as long as they were this level of standard, I'd still be impatiently waiting.
Jessica,
I was VERY pleasantly surprised when I saw that you had released a new chapter to "Saturday Night School"! I have been religiously checking a couple of times a week hoping for new chapters to both this story and "A Beautiful Day", and I definitely wasn't disappointed with this newest chapter!
Please keep the chapters coming whenever you are able to write them!
I hope that chapter 07 will come quickly because i'm worried to know that, since that new chapter, Michelle is alone and naked outdoor during all this time.
I partly agree with SYD649 when he hope that Ronnie could join them at the gardens, but as an unconditional of the "Only One Naked", I will prefer that Ronnie remains clothed, so one more person being present and seeing Michelle when she is naked will increase her sensations and add to her new dependent status to Charlie.
This is my favorite story thread. Wish the stories came sooner. Ronni in the gardens with Michelle and Charlie. Lots of good options here. Please keep this story line going. Love this thead.
Once again I'm impressed with your writing and you have me wanting more!
First post on this website ever. I've never been moved to post before. I just love this story. Mostly how the author has developed the characters. I was so nervous to see how lunch would go and was rooting for Charlie! In this chapter, I was concerned how Michelle seemed more sad and was becoming more dependant on Charlie (You haven't even kissed me!). I sure hope he treats her well and keeps her safe! Wouldn't mind seeing her keep a bit of control and confidence! Michelle is such a great character! Thank you Jessica! Would love to see more!
Fluid, very well written, lively, realistic characters and Incredibly smoking hot! You are talented, I look forward to the next installment of your story
but this is probably the best series on this website. So well written with charming, believable characters. Keep up the amazing work.
A life long lived well past high school BS but i remember girls like her well. She was beautiful but outside my reach. I love your story and can't wait for the next piece.
This is the best series i've read in my years of coming here to read. Very impatiently waiting for chapter 7. Keep it coming author! All the way from SG!
Please for the love of Mike, more. And please, not so long between chapters, I'm going crazy waiting.
what a great story. nothing else to add. no advice, no negatives, no nothing. nothing but great!
This has been such a fabulous series... full of real reactions and youthful adventures. I wish I'd met such a scarily fun partner as a teen.
Jessica_,
You could continue to write and add chapters to this until the end of time and I, and a growing host of your appreciative fans would be right here to continue to read them!
I had to FORCE myself to go to bed in the wee hours of the morning and here I've been since first waking up. I'm sure I read faster than you write so I'll quickly - oh TOO quickly! - finish before your story comes to an end. But I'll wait until you say this is the last chapter before I stop hoping that the next one is only days away!
An OUTSTANDING series!! Keep 'em coming!!
X-Man
A.K.A. xavierw
Great story. Can't wait for more and to find out what happens to the naked girl on the front stoop. Do you plan to post a new chapter? Thanks for your story.
It does not matter how many exclaimation points I put after my initial comment; it is not enough to show you how much pleasure I derive from reading your stories about Michelle and her 'boyfriend!' The reason I put the word boyfriend's in quotation marks is because I don't see them staying single once they can legally marry! You don't say in wihich state they reside, so there could be legal issues concerning their marriage. Nevertheless, I would like to see them settling down together somewhere with a lot of open space where they could go buck-starkers whenever the desire grabbed them. Oh, by the way,xthis officially is my new favorite story series!!!
YOMEYO
This story is just too awesome for words to describe!
The first chapter was slightly interesting but silly. Seeing this over and over again is getting ridiculous. End this series.
No, no, no...that was absolutely mean to put her out like that!! Better his mom meet Michelle nude, in her living room, than THAT!!
Charlie is gonna have to make this up to Michelle...
This whole submission part of the story is so HHHOOOTTTTTTT!!! 🔥 🔥 🔥...Michelle is sweet, yet the 'dark' side comes out for Charlie so well...this, I hope, bodes well for their future...❤ TOGETHER!!
**FIVE STARS**...ABSOLUTELY DESERVED...ON TO NEXT CHAPTER!!
I love your writing skills and the story is soft and very erotic. I love it. 5 stars and thanks for sharing.