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Click hereThe same Casey Wright who once saved a girl named Chloe; only to let her die that one named Beth might live.
THE END?
Please, and I mean this with as much constructive criticism as I possibly can, please get a proof reader. Your stories are top notch, and with some grammar and spelling fixes, would be even better!
Thank you for sharing these stories with us!
This is the second time I have read this story. I really enjoyed the entire plot and wish that you might grace us with at least a second chapter.
I don't know if they will be setting or sitting but rest assured, Ms. Chloe, Casey and Tess will be appearing at a theater near you soon. Chloe and Casey have plans for some gorgeous young Italian grape stompers while Tess is out for some very interesting revenge.
At first I thought it was just a sexy romp, which I am cool with, but then... BAM! Hot with humor and intrigue, a pretty cool combination, Chloe was adorable and I pretty much loved Casey. I really loved that you tied up all of the loose ends, yeah, you can add another chapter... A lot can still happen with these women, but if you don't I am at least not left hanging... Like I am with Tess :)
One baby criticism would be your use of set vs. sit and setting vs. sitting. Either way, easy and fun to read.
I never guessed that the abduction was staged to let Chloe disappear, was sure her father was behind it.