by LarryToLaura
More in this grove please,,,,much more!
Especially more about dress style,what wearing,,,,oooo my
i agree with the other commenter .leave a warning in the title and you might want to proof read your work before posting it .it feels rushed.
Better be remorse for the rape and a pledge to treat him right. What I just read was a violent assault.
The story is tagged forced, if you need a trigger warning for rape then maybe check the tags before you read a story.
I think this would have been better if it was the son's idea. Anything forced is illegal even here!
a fucking disclaimer would be good? like, trigger warnings are a thing that exist. emotional manipulation isn't hot for most people.
you should write down more feelings of Andrew and show more love between father and son.
You wrote his Dad telling him, "I hope you turn out queer. Be easier on you. Women are trouble, Andrew. You hear me? I mean it. You understand?" He said, his words slurring together." My Dad often told me similar things saying, "Don't you ever get married. If you do, I'll kick your ass!" My Dad never said he'd hoped I turn out queer though!
I've never thought of my own Dad, like what you wrote about in this story. But the Daddy/son becoming his "wife" stories have turned me on!