by FastVamp
What was that supposed to be? Who, "quote, unquote" saves their marriage by cheating? And what's with the marriage going "stale" after 16 years?" Is the MC really that lousy a lover? 5 stories, 3 followers .... says a lot. 1*
Extremely lacking in establishing background of the husband/wife relationship; plot development sparse and simplistic; character development non-existent during the limited story action.
Fucking here, fucking there, fucking everywhere...but why--except for everyone to be fucking?
The title is totally unrelated to the story--but is suggestive of other plots which could be developed.
Think of some and go write.