All Comments on 'Saving Her Good Boy Ch. 01'

Please let Dominique win.

Dom is perfect

It was awful, since you asked. Cuck stories are never really worth reading. Don't really care where this goes, or if you waste more time continuing it.

You seem to have a thing for black girls, nothing wrong with that just curious. The story I think is dark but, so long as the worst thing that happens to Stephanie isn’t just roger breaking up with her it’ll be fine. But Dominique fell in love with him after one time meeting him seems unlikely. Uh An idea for a story might be a university one where a boy is basically kidnapped and black mailed by his professor and she could be like an actual dominatrix, with like whips, blindfolds, cockrings, cbt, bondage and torture and all that

Can you make a story about a world with reverse gender roles? I love your books.

great plot. waiting for the next chapter.

Your stories are the exact same as others recently uploaded by different authors. Idc if you say it's inspired by because it's a carbon copy: Wimpy/feminine nerd, jock woman and humiliation over and over again. Write something new for god's sake. The savior trope was a bore to read when it was a strong male and helpless female. Swapping the roles does not change the trope, but makes it even cringier to read.

There are millions of stories with jock boys and nerdy girls and it is only a bore. There are only dozens of stories with jock girls and nerdy boys, and suddenly it’s cringy. I think your problem with the girl being the strong one is because you are a fucking misogynist so stop reading my works because no one is forcing you to!

good so far, now for the 2nd chapter

Yo I'm the anon that commented about the other story following manga logic.

This one is a little clingy in so far as the male leads actions/reactions.

However the situation is far more believable in so far as the rules you set for the world you create.

This is important for immersions sake.

In any case it's a good scenario setup, well done.

Instead of fighting both should make him their cuck and have him eat loads of cum from their pussies and assholes. Maybe add more girls who feed him creampies regularly from hundreds of cocks.