All Comments on 'Saving Justina Ch. 01'

Excellent start ….love it

Great start to the story.

Wow! Great story so far. Can't wait for Chapter 2!

Wonderful story, and I love the way you executed a good slow burn! It's rare here; the forum is usually dominated by short smuts, but you've put effort into building the characters and portraying their mutual attraction. I'm impressed, and I'm already hooked on the story! 5 ***** from me and a follow!

Now I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

Please make their relationship romantic—please, please :)

The story is fantastic! I adore romances; they're incredibly rare in this category that typically tends to devolve into degradation, humiliation, and gangbangs—themes I dislike. So, finding interesting stories that cater to my taste is a challenge, but today, I've stumbled upon one! Thank you for sharing this story; I'm hungrily awaiting more.

However, there's one thing that's been on my mind. Why is the tag labeled as "female to male" when it should be "male to female"? I'm hoping the main protagonist won't undergo a change into a woman as well? :)

Please submit another chapter soon!

Good! Great! I hope it will be exclusive relationship, I hate it when a good romance turns into something crazy with 1000 cocks flying around

Adorable and so hot !!!

5 stars and a request for more! I love the romance you’ve worked in and can’t wait to see how you create the sexual dynamic.

Can't wait for more!

Excellent job 5 stars

: ) Stef

Can't wait for the next installment

Good grief Justina, would you marry me ??? This was a 5 STAR Love story all the way. Maybe that's what I need to do to find the love of my life. Post a room for rent.

More! Well written, so lovely!

I found this to be a base for a great story.

The writing needs a proof reader to place a few missing words and proper punctuation.

The writing style suggest the author is english.

As I speak the american version of english, I had to reread a few of the phrases to understand the meaning.

Being a first attempt at writing, this work is not bad.

I hope the author will take this as well ment constructive criticism.

Very well rounded story, can't wait for chapter 2 of this, great build, absolutely love the stories on here that are love stories

Nice please continue your series

Oh what a beautiful story! I can’t wait to read more of what you write.

Cheering on sidelines. Go team go. Sounds like wonderful start

Dear Charlette...

If you're going to be THAT person, you need to make sure that your own shit is perfect.

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1) The writing style suggest_S_ the author is _E_nglish.

2) As I speak the _A_merican version of _E_nglish

3) Being a first attempt at writing, this work is not bad. <----- Horrible phrasing. I would say "This work is not bad for a first attempt."

4) I hope the author will take this as well-me_A_nt constructive criticism.

It's a great first story, thanks for sharing it and I hope we will see many more!

This was such a wonderful read. I would love to read more!

Either I'm having a weird case of "read this before" or I remember reading this a while ago. Is this posted on another site by chance?

very good and I love romantic mood of the story, enough with only smuts

You portray Justina's life and his/her problems, emotions and feelings wonderfully. It's good that he has such a supportive person and even Luka in love with Justin. Honestly, I wish I had someone like Luka. I really like Justina, I would like to be like her. Have so much courage, strength in yourself and be able to cross individual boundaries. Will Justina do breast surgery or maybe she will stay with her beautiful figure, wonderful body and fall in love with Luca as he did with her? Will their acquaintance, friendship or maybe love lead to a wedding? I am waiting with great interest and great impatience for the further fate of Justin and Luka. 📖🧑🏻👨‍❤️‍👨👧🏻❤️👩🏻‍🦳.

ps. Sorry for grammatical errors and inaccuracies, but I don't speak English.

SissyBoy from Warsaw, Poland. 📖👩🏻‍🦳👩🏻❤️🧒🏻.

❤️📖❤️

Wspaniale przedstawiasz życie Justiny/a i jego/jej problemy oraz emocje, uczucia jakie przeżywa. Dobrze że ma taką osobę wspierającą a nawet zakochaną w Justinie, jakim jest Luka. Powiem szczerze że chciał/a bym mieć takiego kogoś jak Luka. Bardzo podoba Mi się Justina, chciał/a bym być jak Ona. Mieć tyle odwagi, siły w sobie i umieć przekraczać poszczególne granice. Czy Justina zrobi operację piersi a może jednak zostanie przy swojej pięknej figurze, cudownym ciałku i zakocha się w Luce tak jak On w niej? Czy ich znajomość, przyjaźń a może miłość doprowadzi do ślubu? Z wielkim zainteresowaniem i bardzo wielką niecierpliwością czekam na dalsze losy Justina/y i Luka 📖🧑🏻👨‍❤️‍👨👧🏻❤️👩🏻‍🦳.

ps. Przepraszam za błędy i niedokładności językowe ale nie znam języka angielskiego.

SissyBoy z Warszawy, Polska. 📖👩🏻‍🦳👩🏻❤️🧒🏻.

You're leaning hard on hard politics here.