All Comments on 'Savior Ch. 18'

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Baldy74 almost 3 years ago

I'm still enjoying the story and characters but it's getting to be a hard slog now. 18 chapters in and we've hardly got anywhere. Over 30 pages and they still haven't confronted one single orca. You write very well, I just hope it starts moving a bit faster soon.

Boyd Percy almost 3 years ago

Exciting chapter!

Anonymousalmost 3 years ago

i disagree, good characters and the plot moving steadily forward. We know they are going to find Garrett or Carl soon. Keep going atyour own pace, enyoying this story.

kiwiplum almost 3 years ago

enjoying these characters thanks

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