All Comments on 'Savior Ch. 20'

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Boyd Percy almost 3 years ago

Another good chapter!

Tofu2222 almost 3 years ago

was enjoying your story telling but....

Reading this is a bit of a Sanity Check in itself - talk about drip feeding a story - so disappointing - reading this is like my typing s-l-o-w.

I am about to remove you from my preferred writers.

t8ntlikly almost 3 years ago

I was going to give this story 5 stars, but jut can't. Not because of the writing or context or anything of that nature,

but because of the way the story has been presented. 2 pages per chapter over 20 Chapters and from what I see he's not even close to a resolution. Come on! It's almost getting to the point to where I'm losing interest.

Anonymousalmost 3 years ago

Enjoying this ... slow as it is. Daily postings are the saving grace. Glad I never read the Matchmaker series until now; it’s a nice filler to the next posting.

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