All Comments on 'Savior Ch. 21'

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Smiffy69 almost 3 years ago

I’m starting to get as depressed as the rest of them. It’s relentless. Let’s have an upturn in their fortune.

Boyd Percy almost 3 years ago

Another good chapter!

Anonymousalmost 3 years ago

Time now this story moved forward to the inevitable altercation

ag2507 almost 3 years ago

I am beginning to weary... No plot progression, just more of the same distractions. We are all going to fall off the string if it gets too long!!!

t8ntlikly almost 3 years ago

Come on Sanity Check, You're really dragging this story out way too long, and now you've gone from 2 page chapter to a 1 page chapter. I can't speak for anyone else, but I've lost interest. Sorry I'm done.

Anonymousalmost 3 years ago

SanityCheck has kindly commented on 2 other previous posts advising of the number of chapters. If you are struggling to keep your interest, just wait until they are all posted then. I am enjoying the story, I just wish that each chapter was a bit longer.

Anonymousalmost 3 years ago

done

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