All Comments on 'Savior Ch. 22'

Exciting chapter!

5

I think it is stalled too much.

This was a difficult chapter to read. Abuse of children and women is ugly enough without having it described vividly. Sometimes reality sucks.

I’m trying to hang with this story, but at this point I’m ready to give up on it. It’s taking fifteen forevers to get anywhere, and the good guys never catch a break. The writing is good and I like most of the characters, but time is precious and I don’t have too much to dedicate to the soap opera pacing going on here.

Agree this is going to slow, need to move it along can only take reading all the abuse for so long.

I do want to see how this story resolves but there is just so much padding between anything happening. Don't think I'll start another one of your stories, which is a shame as you write great characters.

I guess writers with little imigation have to have their characters all do stupid stuff to have any kind of story. Sorry I wasted my time.

Rule 1 in a horror movie - don't go outside by yourself. Hanna is the epitomy of stupid and the slow pace is killing it. Time to abandon methinks.

too short. too slow. too stupid.