- Romance
- Savior Ch. 22
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As Carl left in rumble of V-Twin thunder, I took a deep breath and began to trudge across the parking lot in the direction of my keys, hoping it wouldn't take me long to find them.
- COMMENTS
ag2507almost 3 years agoRule 1 in a horror movie - don't go outside by yourself. Hanna is the epitomy of stupid and the slow pace is killing it. Time to abandon methinks.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoI guess writers with little imigation have to have their characters all do stupid stuff to have any kind of story. Sorry I wasted my time.
Baldy74almost 3 years agoI do want to see how this story resolves but there is just so much padding between anything happening. Don't think I'll start another one of your stories, which is a shame as you write great characters.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoAgree this is going to slow, need to move it along can only take reading all the abuse for so long.
