by DreamerByTheDiamonds
Hmm, I don't know where you are going with this story, but then, I guess you don't either since you asked for input.
It is very intriguing so far, a major character falls into deep depression and appears to have killed herself. But, there is an undisclosed person who is investigating the death and the facts are questioned.
The Adurants are showing us, once again, that they are vibrantly in love, despite their grief over the death of their friend.
Then, not one but two, gentlemen are pursuing the young woman from the temple.
Where will it lead from here?