All Comments on 'SC - The Succubus Job'

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HaruhiSuzumiaHaruhiSuzumiaabout 4 years ago

Truly excellent.

I enjoyed every moment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Amazing

Loved it, like a slice of life story set in the Fable universe. Well planned and executed. I appreciate the fully realized setting and the relateable characters. I honestly enjoyed the humour, the explanation and the interactions. I want to see more in this setting, storytelling like your's deserves to be shared. You made my week, and I'm grateful.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Awesome story, and actually a great start to a much larger plot.

I truly hope you continue with this story. It has so much potential for more stories. Well done

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
A good story written well

Please don’t wait another 10 years before writing your next story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
please...more

Thanks for posting this... something for every aspiring succubus. :>

avengilineavengilineabout 4 years ago
Very entertaining and refreshing!

A true short story! It's been a while, but I find the idea of Ordan being tickled absolutely hilarious (although for him, clearly it wouldn't be). Great job! Look forward to reading more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
A touch of Pratchett

I loved this! It hit a lot of Pratchett notes which I thoroughly enjoyed

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