by NateKhyrivon
Too cliche. Truth or dare...tequila, and girls kissing? NO THANKS!! Would've been better if you'd just kept it to the brother and sister ONLY. 1*
5/5 enjoyed the continued Nate and Nikki story. Looking forward to their cruise adventures.
Very good story!
I liked the inclusion of the incestuous cousins to even things out, and give Nate and Nikki some calming.
Please continue with the cruise idea, and/or the christmas cabin. Somewhere in there, you could insert some manner of commitment ceremony and then have them move in together so their lives can truly start. Just don't get them pregnant. That would ruin a great love story.
Sincerely,
B4PW.
I’m genuinely confused as to why they can’t spend time together as a couple. Their parents aren’t going to see them hanging out even Nikki sleeping over and immediately jump to “they must be sleeping together.” Not to mention they have time to go on dates, what exactly is stopping them from using that date time to go to his apartment instead of the movies?