by redwards_119
Having struggled through a lot of mediocre stuff here lately, I was amazed and overjoyed to read this.
Well imagined and written. Hardly any spelling/grammar errors!
Loved the way we see the different threads coming together.
Really looking forward to the next episode.
Hopefully it doesn't get darker - I think you've got this currently pitched almost perfect.
Can we expect a reunion coming in the not too distant future up at the big house?
;)
Well done.
Thanks!
Outstanding story so far - and this is only the beginning! Please continue......
This was great. I loved how you fleshed out the different characters. I can't wait to find out more.